Some believe that it is beneficial to show foreign films while others feel this can have a negative impact on local culture. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, there is a remarkable competition between local and foreign films in every country. Strata of the populace reiterate that foreign movies should be allowed in the country however, on the contrary, opponents believe that these movies have implacable effects on the local culture. In my opinion, restricting foreign movies is not an efficient way of preserving local culture some robust steps should be taken for its sake. This essay will discuss both the views in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, firstly, foreign movies when launched in the market they have to compete with the local market of the country where it to be telecasted hence, the competition in-country or reason increases. This means that local people need to produce a better quality movie in order to make their clients more satisfied. Apart from this, the viewers get more choices to entertain themselves. For instance, the Marvel studio release one movie per year and its audience waits for it everywhere around the globe because of their prominence hence, local cinemas like to purchase that movie to attract more population and generate revenue.
Nonetheless, to say, the people who believe it have a negative impact they reiterate that the kids get spoiled by watching their action heroes and make them as their role models. However, they forget that even local movies depict the same. The best way to preserve culture and tradition is to teach them in the school and colleges. To illustrate, in India every state has its language subject and its culture subject as a compulsory subject like in Punjab, Punjabi is compulsory. In other words, values can be preserved by education not by restricting others.
To conclude, foreign movies generate revenue to the other country and also increase the competition among movies. However, making kids aware of their culture and tradition in the school is the best way to make them knowledge equip.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1618.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12025316456 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54525613514 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541139240506 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.7274603904 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.866666667 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0666666667 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.46666666667 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208934146201 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0711014935283 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0448723455214 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125046772896 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0711219070867 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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