Some countries are struggling with an increase in the rate of crime. Many people think that having more police on the streets is the only way to rude crime. To extend do you agree?
Most of the nations are grappling with the rise in the crime rate. Strata of the populace reiterate that the best way to curb the crime is by increasing the patrolling of police on the roadside. This essay is in complete disagreement with the above-said notion.
To begin with, firstly, the champions of the increasing police on the road have credence that more police means more surveillance which implicates more safety and security. They also assume by using this model people can approach police more easily and without hesitation. Apart from this, being around will help them reach the incident at an appropriate time. For instance, in 1867 John Kennedy after being appointed as president of USA increase the police in the local areas which really resulted in cuts down in crime.
However, the support of the contrary has a belief that increasing humans in the police force is just a wastage of government money and a burden on the taxpayer. Nowadays, modern technology has come into existence hence, installing surveillance cameras around the city can help not only in decreasing the crime but also assist in identifying the criminal. These cameras are able to capture the behavior of the customers and any misbehave by any person which can be later produced as evidence against him. Hence, instead of using and installing manpower around the city, the government should install cameras. To illustrate, in goa the last CM Chandra Gopal found that many people spoil the beach but the government was not able to identify hence, they install cameras in order to capture the guilty and this step provided them with the desired results.
To conclude, more police might imply more security but it does not guaranty it however, the cameras can mitigate the crime rate by recording the surrounding.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, really, so, apart from, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1502.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00666666667 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55986978836 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566666666667 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.9676818631 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.538461538 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0769230769 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53846153846 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259364369383 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0899048176951 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0675201343265 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169678832846 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0569211600658 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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