In some countries children have very strict rules of behaviour, in
other countries they are allowed to do almost anything they want.
To what extent should children have to follow rules?
Up bringing children is difficult job irrespective of country they are put up. Although, some countries have very relaxed attitude towards raising children some of them are very strict in making them obey rules. However, its combination of both the attitudes which will benefit the children.
Firstly, it's the culture that decides how the children will be brought up. The world has vast number of cultures and each is different in its own way. The behaviour and attitude towards life varies in each children and the source of this variedness can be tracked back to the way they were brought up.
In cultures like Korea, children should obey parents or teachers with zero tolerance and any disobedience is punished severely. These children spent their childhood mostly in obeying orders but they will learn how to respect adults, be responsible and acquire many skills while they are young. In contrast, countries like United States and England will give complete freedom to children. These children will be best at their creativity and don't hesitate to try anything new or to experiment. However, children grown up like this tend to show least respect for adults.
Secondly, the style of parenting where parents are authoritarians are fading away slowly. This style of parenting has negative effects on children when they enter adulthood not to mention their spoiled childhood which is filled with abuses. The child's inner strength and creativity will blossom only when they nurture in right environment. Several countries in the world has strict rules on child abuse which prevents physical abuses from parents or teaches. However, a light punishment or warning if children seem to deviate from good track of habits or behaviour is suggested.
To conclude, each method has its merits and demerits. For best results, one should try the combination of both the approaches.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'firstly', 'however', 'if', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'while', 'in contrast']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.255255255255 0.247107183377 103% => OK
Verbs: 0.171171171171 0.155533422707 110% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0690690690691 0.0946595960268 73% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0510510510511 0.0501214627716 102% => OK
Pronouns: 0.045045045045 0.0437548338989 103% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0990990990991 0.122226691241 81% => OK
Participles: 0.048048048048 0.0403226058552 119% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.56599189485 2.80594681477 91% => OK
Infinitives: 0.027027027027 0.0326793684256 83% => OK
Particles: 0.00900900900901 0.00163938923432 550% => OK
Determiners: 0.0750750750751 0.0861772015684 87% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.027027027027 0.021408717616 126% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.027027027027 0.011925033212 227% => Maybe 'Which' is overused. If other WH_determiners like 'Who, What, Whom, Whose...' are used too in sentences, then there are no issues.
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1881.0 1933.35771543 97% => OK
No of words: 304.0 316.048096192 96% => OK
Chars per words: 6.1875 6.12580529183 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20517956788 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.398026315789 0.374742101984 106% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.322368421053 0.28420135186 113% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.217105263158 0.203846283523 107% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.118421052632 0.137316102897 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56599189485 2.80594681477 91% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.037074148 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569078947368 0.56093040696 101% => OK
Word variations: 60.7919185403 60.7387585426 100% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0891783567 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.8888888889 20.7743622355 81% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.2259784217 49.517814964 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.5 127.492653851 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8888888889 20.7743622355 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.555555555556 0.814263465372 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 3.99599198397 100% => OK
Readability: 49.1257309942 49.1944974215 100% => OK
Elegance: 1.50561797753 1.69124875643 89% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.34521789699 0.332605444948 104% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0922161011182 0.102741220458 90% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0747244511212 0.0668466124924 112% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.521349520904 0.534860350844 97% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.112416654248 0.148594505496 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117463078309 0.134430193775 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0680106227606 0.0742795772207 92% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.224660849335 0.324371583561 69% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0514049279956 0.0638462369009 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199932275295 0.228012699653 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0852344738564 0.058150111329 147% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.68436873747 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.41683366733 88% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 5.90881763527 102% => OK
Negative topic words: 6.0 2.5751503006 233% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 1.9629258517 153% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 10.4468937876 144% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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