Some employers believe that job applicants’ social skills are more important than their academic qualifications. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
While numerous employers believe in the social skillset of job applicants, others are in favor of their academic qualifications. I personally side with the latter group of peoples' opinion.
On the one hand, several organizations consider social skills as a paramount factor for a person to apply for a job. Perhaps the main argument against this idea is that in any profession, social skills such as communication or dealing with different personalities are of significant importance. For instance, If an individual knows how to tackle the different sorts of behaviours of one's peers, one might be able to do a job with good harmony. Further, such people would outperform during pressurised situations, unforeseen scenarios and tight deadlines. However, as mentioned earlier social skills are crucial, but not the only key factor for a vacancy and academic qualifications are the fundamental aspect of a job applicant.
At the same time, I personally support those who are in favor of academic credentials. The main reason to support this idea is that for any sort of job, one must possess the extensive theoretical knowledge of the specific field. This is to say that during educational tenure people grasp the detailed knowledge of the subject which is, in turn, of a dire help during a job. Therefore, I believe educational qualifications play a pivotal role in any job. For instance, social skills are not as important as medical knowledge is vital for a doctor to see a patient. Similarly, for the position of a developer, programming is the core requirement despite social skillset. So, we can say field related study is a must for all job aspirants.
In conclusion, although manifold employers support the view to find social skills in job seekers, I believe academics are imperative for a job.
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Suggestion: one's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, similarly, so, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, sort of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1521.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13851351351 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08067913156 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.550675675676 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.9236627836 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.4 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7333333333 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262658238654 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0923555569 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0702155248994 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19964773146 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.060315574458 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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