Some families think the best way to take care of their aging parents is to care for them at home. Others believe that it is better for their parents to live in a special home for the elderly.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Some people believe that old parents should be cared at home because they would like to express their responsibility to their old parents, and save money while others would rather let them stay in the aged care centre for better care and due to lack of time. In my opinion, I would like my old parents to stay at home for some reasons.
I believe that letting aging parents stay at home will be better in terms of expense and responsibility. Firstly, offspring always love their parents, who have grown them up from babies until becoming adults, so they may feel unhappy if their parents live away from home. Secondly, it is rather costly to send them to homes for the elderly because offspring need to pay the periodical expense, which covers fees on care, food and entertainment.
However, many people claim that they don’t have much time and enough facilities to care for their aging parents at home. It may be understandable since most people have a full-time job, which requires them to contribute much of their time and energy at work. Therefore, they certainly feel tired when get home, and ignore the care of their parents. In addition, the facilities at home are not able to be compared to a care centre’s. For example, the centres have a much bigger space and full of care equipment which old people are really interested.
In conclusion, to show families’ responsibility to their aging parents and to reduce costs, the old parents should be cared for at home. On the other hand, if people actually don’t have much time or look for better care conditions for their parents, they may rely on the aging care centres.
Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'but', 'first', 'firstly', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'really', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'therefore', 'while', 'for example', 'in addition', 'in conclusion', 'in my opinion', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.237082066869 0.247107183377 96% => OK
Verbs: 0.170212765957 0.155533422707 109% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0759878419453 0.0946595960268 80% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0455927051672 0.0501214627716 91% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0729483282675 0.0437548338989 167% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.12462006079 0.122226691241 102% => OK
Participles: 0.0395136778116 0.0403226058552 98% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.61021975185 2.80594681477 93% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0425531914894 0.0326793684256 130% => OK
Particles: 0.00303951367781 0.00163938923432 185% => OK
Determiners: 0.0425531914894 0.0861772015684 49% => Some determiners wanted.
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0273556231003 0.021408717616 128% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0151975683891 0.011925033212 127% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1652.0 1933.35771543 85% => OK
No of words: 285.0 316.048096192 90% => OK
Chars per words: 5.79649122807 6.12580529183 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20517956788 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.287719298246 0.374742101984 77% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.2 0.28420135186 70% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.136842105263 0.203846283523 67% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0842105263158 0.137316102897 61% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61021975185 2.80594681477 93% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.037074148 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498245614035 0.56093040696 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 48.6339632411 60.7387585426 80% => OK
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0891783567 68% => OK
Sentence length: 25.9090909091 20.7743622355 125% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.1730888323 49.517814964 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.181818182 127.492653851 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9090909091 20.7743622355 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.72727272727 0.814263465372 212% => Less Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 3.99599198397 0% => OK
Readability: 45.9090909091 49.1944974215 93% => OK
Elegance: 1.38947368421 1.69124875643 82% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.575731883992 0.332605444948 173% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.156725796811 0.102741220458 153% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0961349494647 0.0668466124924 144% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.622274526484 0.534860350844 116% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.135772850461 0.148594505496 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.274431707003 0.134430193775 204% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.090306443165 0.0742795772207 122% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.406966788029 0.324371583561 125% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0671823155964 0.0638462369009 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.423789730143 0.228012699653 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0259940793572 0.058150111329 45% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.68436873747 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.41683366733 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 11.0 5.90881763527 186% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.5751503006 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 0.0 1.9629258517 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 11.0 10.4468937876 105% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.