Some people argue that it is important to have an enjoyable job than to earn a lot of money.Others disagree and think that a good salary leads to a happy life.Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
The convincing argument as well as in my opinion can be made that a job not only is interesting and suitable but also have a position in society with an attractive salary can have significant influences on the physical and mental lives of every people.
First and foremost, it should be claimed that an interesting or appropriate job not only helps people to express their passion, ability, and personality in the best way but also helps them to be brave enough to overcome difficulties and failures. And the success of so many individuals and businesses stems from their pursuit of personal interests and passion. The reason for this is that, when a person enjoys his work, he doesn't seem to be burdened when doing that and more or less he considers it a hobby. In the present scenario, the more difficult the careers have, the more stress people will be, a job in choice of liking could avoid many diseases arising out of pressure at work. Additionally, a love for work escalates career growth and can turn people into experts in their field. There are some great examples such as steve jobs, bill gates, and so on.
However, every human being in this modern society needs a certain amount of money to maintain the essential needs of themselves and their families. With the money earned, someone will be satisfied and contented with a full-life materialistically and mentally, but there will also be people who are upset by a life of deprivation. The pressure of "Bread and butter" is increasing every day, leading many people to believe that having money is happiness, and many people can confidently say that their passion is money. Therefore, economic prosperity is a key factor to allow people to lead a fulfilling life materialistically and mentally. A desirable high salary can not only respond to the basic needs of themselves and their loving families but also be able to gain expensive luxuries and luxurious lifestyles. Those are important motivations that make people worship high wages.
In conclusion, it is hard to find a job not only interesting but also strong earnings, so that in my opinion, a job with a good salary will be the first criterion when I apply for a job.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion, more or less
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 10.4138276553 250% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1832.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 377.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85941644562 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81830207521 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538461538462 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 587.7 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.8595609586 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.857142857 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9285714286 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.21428571429 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171403526062 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0601197996398 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0397254322605 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112620320632 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.024638319239 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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