Some people believe that capital punishment should never be used. Other however, argue that it should be allowed for the most serious crimes.
Discuss both views and give your opinion
Many argue that death penalty ought to be inactive. In the same time, others claim that it has to be used for crimes of serious nature. This essay will discuss both views and also shall point out the importance of having the death penalty in the justice system.
One the one hand, people opposing the use of death penalty sees that it is harmful to the society in many ways. To begin with, innocent people could be wrongly convicted and executed due to a mistake during investigations. If such mistake was found after the execution, there is no way to rectify it. In addition, in-spite of the application of capital punishment, crimes rates are necessarily decreasing. For example, a recent government report revealed information that crimes rates percentages are almost the same compared to last year. Furthermore, death penalty application creates a violent culture and encourages revenge. For instance, there is a case of 12 years old boy who electrified his cat after witnessing an execution of a criminal by an electric chair.
On the other hand, supporters of capital punishment say that it deter crimes and provides relief for those in hurt. To elaborate on this, applying death penalty sends a message to all people to think about the consequences of their actions as fear of death stop many people from committing offences. Also, it sends a message to the victim’s relatives and close ones that justice is served under any circumstances. Thus, increase their faith in the system. For example, a recent research showed that the terrorist attacks on Egypt has decreased significantly after the execution of two terrorists who played a major role in the recent terrorists’ attacks. Furthermore, applying the death penalty reduces the cost of imprisonment. Accordingly, government expenditure allocated for this issue can be redirected to other projects that may benefit the whole society.
To conclude, although death penalty application raises red flags when it comes to prosecution procedures and creating a violent culture, it is a fact that capital punishment has more benefits to the society in terms of preventing crimes from taking place, reducing imprisonment costs, and creating financial resources for other projects.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, furthermore, if, may, so, thus, as to, for example, for instance, in addition, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1891.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 361.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23822714681 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93768063984 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567867036011 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 598.5 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.1257330946 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.055555556 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0555555556 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.22222222222 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158304097007 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0502132285433 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0509350063502 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107519766065 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0540497322538 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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