Some people believe that children are given too much free time, they feel that this time should be spent on doing more school work.
How do you think children should spend their free time?
There is no denying the fact that children are future rein-bearer of a country, therefore proper care should be taken in their upbringing. Being free after school time, children are suggested to do more school work by some people. However, I believe that this time should be spent on extra-curriculum activities which can ensure holistic development of a child.
To begin with, in many countries, people give emphasis to studies only and keep their children busy in doing school work, taking extra classes and to do self-study to understand what they taught in the school. They look only one direction of life and want to make their kids engineer, doctors or scientists. For instance, this trend is quite popular in India, where children are supposed to dream about only academic achievements. However, this practice makes the students bookworm and does not let them show their hidden talent and excel in it. Therefore, students should be encouraged to take part in their favorite leisure time activity.
For the physical and mental development of a child, extra-curriculum activities are really necessary. In the evening when students have free time for their own, then they can get training of some physical sports which can really help them to keep themselves physically fit and healthy. For instance, many children have a keen interest in swimming, so by enrolling them in swimming classes, a child not only relish his favorite activity, but it also helps him to be active and physically sound. Furthermore, many kids may have an interest in other activities like singing, dancing or painting. By spending time excelling in their hidden talent, many people can opt it as their profession and can earn name and fame worldwide.
To conclude, this is the time to understand that apart from formal education, there are many other things which need focus of parents for the betterment of their children. Therefore, after school time, youngsters should be motivated to opt activities of their interest.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 465, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
...ments. However, this practice makes the students bookworm and does not let them show the...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'really', 'so', 'then', 'therefore', 'apart from', 'for instance', 'to begin with']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.242506811989 0.247107183377 98% => OK
Verbs: 0.16621253406 0.155533422707 107% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0871934604905 0.0946595960268 92% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0517711171662 0.0501214627716 103% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0626702997275 0.0437548338989 143% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.103542234332 0.122226691241 85% => OK
Participles: 0.0408719346049 0.0403226058552 101% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.74264876509 2.80594681477 98% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0354223433243 0.0326793684256 108% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0572207084469 0.0861772015684 66% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0272479564033 0.021408717616 127% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.016348773842 0.011925033212 137% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2006.0 1933.35771543 104% => OK
No of words: 328.0 316.048096192 104% => OK
Chars per words: 6.11585365854 6.12580529183 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20517956788 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.356707317073 0.374742101984 95% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.265243902439 0.28420135186 93% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.225609756098 0.203846283523 111% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.137195121951 0.137316102897 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74264876509 2.80594681477 98% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.037074148 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564024390244 0.56093040696 101% => OK
Word variations: 61.4532072631 60.7387585426 101% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0891783567 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.8666666667 20.7743622355 105% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.8600886435 49.517814964 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.733333333 127.492653851 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8666666667 20.7743622355 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.933333333333 0.814263465372 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.99599198397 25% => OK
Readability: 48.3910569106 49.1944974215 98% => OK
Elegance: 1.3786407767 1.69124875643 82% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278550288872 0.332605444948 84% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0820670420848 0.102741220458 80% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0549259469706 0.0668466124924 82% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.517086319412 0.534860350844 97% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.128671055373 0.148594505496 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119384049529 0.134430193775 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0964630251175 0.0742795772207 130% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.295239359256 0.324371583561 91% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0755908335906 0.0638462369009 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.229350660839 0.228012699653 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.135956153963 0.058150111329 234% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.68436873747 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.41683366733 88% => OK
Positive topic words: 11.0 5.90881763527 186% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 1.9629258517 153% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 10.4468937876 144% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.