Some people of the believe that children should not be given homework every day, while others believe that they must get homework every day to be successful at school.Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Essay topics:

Some people of the believe that children should not be given homework every day, while others believe that they must get homework every day to be successful at school.

Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

There is no doubt that giving homework is one the best ways to evaluate to what extent the child understood the class. Although some people believe that children be given assignments daily to succeed at school. I would argue that it will provide no or less time for overall development of child.

On the one hand, those who believe homework should be given daily might argue that it will help the child remember the coursework and perform well in exams. This in turn improve the academic results of the child and having good percentage in school will help him in the future endeavors. For example, good colleges give first preference to the person’s academics while giving admission. However, if a child is not given homework, every single day then they might forget what they have learnt quickly and will not do good in the exams.

On the other hand, my view is that not having to do schoolwork daily will give the children sometime for self-development. Firstly, the kids can utilize this time to explore their passions and work on improving these skills apart from academics. For example, children interested in sports, arts and music can work on their talents and represent their countries on international levels. Secondly, as the saying goes all work and no play makes jack the dull boy, working on assignments everyday will leave the child stressed and with no time to have fun or relax.

In conclusion, despite helping the students to succeed at school and perform well academically, doing homework daily will hinder the overall growth of a child and will leave them with no time to pursue their passions and hobbies.

Votes
Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 120, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... extent the child understood the class. Although some people believe that children be gi...
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Line 1, column 247, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...ool. I would argue that it will provide no or less time for overall development of...
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Line 5, column 485, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...ck the dull boy, working on assignments everyday will leave the child stressed and with ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, while, apart from, for example, in conclusion, no doubt, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1364.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90647482014 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55179764843 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543165467626 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.912911902 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.666666667 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1666666667 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4166666667 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203994571322 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0823891396158 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0923025641961 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12909476887 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0817873347181 0.056905535591 144% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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