Some people believe that to give opportunities to the new generation companies should encourage high level employees who are older than 55 to retire. Do you agree or disagree?
The higher designations in most companies are attained by aged people. Strata of the populace reiterate that the younger generation should be given a chance to attain a higher level and people above the age of 55 should get retirement. I firmly agree with the above-mentioned notion.
To begin with, the younger generation is fervent as compared to aged people. They can easily travel long distances in order to increase the business of their company and can handle numerous tasks at a single time. Additionally, they are less prone to health issues which are a very common issue in the case of the elderly. Youngsters nowadays like to have healthy food and gym addicts because they believe that good looking and healthy mind is the key to success. For instance, the survey done by “The Time” reveals that 78 percent of people have an opinion that the younger generation should be given an opportunity as they are more passionate to work.
Furthermore, the young generation is aware of new technology and always remains update, hence, the company needs not to arrange any kind of training program for them in order to teach them new technology. On the other hand, old people are more satisfied with the paperwork which consumes a lot of time and energy. Moreover, they are less likely to grab new technology as they have robust nature. Furthermore, if companies utilize some money to make them learn new technology it will end up in wastage of money because after short period of time, they will be retired without providing adequate benefit to the company. For instance, in the government office old staff still uses to do paperwork instead of using a computer which is a faster medium for performing any task.
To conclude, I completely agree with the statement that older people should retire after the age of 55 so that the younger generation has more creative ideas as they are technology freak and need not given special training to learn something. They are more passionate and energetic than the old ones.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 531, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...in wastage of money because after short period of time, they will be retired without providing...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, if, look, moreover, so, still, for instance, kind of, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1681.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88662790698 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60032441449 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543604651163 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 546.3 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.0151832641 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.066666667 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9333333333 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.06666666667 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200762113161 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0604826868492 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.049095073956 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126869531145 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0337409536526 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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