Some people believe that living in big cities is becoming more difficult. Others believe that it is getting easier. Discuss both view and give your own opinion.
These days lot of people are moving to big cities be it in search of better life or for more employment opportunities. While some are of opinion that the life is getting difficult, others think that it is easy to live in cities. In this essay I will discuss both the points and also present my own opinion.
There are some drawbacks of living in cities. First of all, the amount of pollution in cities is always higher in cities when compared to small towns/villages. Due to large number of industries and vehicles the air and sound pollution is more. For example as large number of people travelling from work to home uses their own vehicles or public transport which causes both air and noise pollution.Secondly, there is lot of competition for each job application which also makes the chances of getting the job little difficult in cities when compared to towns. Therefore, these are the few things which makes life in a city little challenging.
On the other hand, some people believe that life in cities is easier. There are many pros of city life such as access to better hospitals, good schools and colleges, more employment opportunities. And also the amount of money paid as wages/salaries is also high when compared to towns. For instance, a person working in an hospital in city earns good when compared to a doctor practicing in a town. Furthermore there are many shopping malls, theaters for entertainment and a large number of restaurants with different cuisines in large city. So the life in a city is easier and entertaining.
After weighing pros and cons of city life, I would conclude that life in a city is easier with better access to good schools and hospitals with a lot of places of entertainment.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'days'' or 'day's'?
Suggestion: days'; day's
These days lot of people are moving to big cities ...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Secondly
...ich causes both air and noise pollution.Secondly, there is lot of competition for each j...
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Line 5, column 321, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...owns. For instance, a person working in an hospital in city earns good when compar...
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Line 5, column 400, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Furthermore,
...pared to a doctor practicing in a town. Furthermore there are many shopping malls, theaters...
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Line 5, column 474, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...g malls, theaters for entertainment and a large number of restaurants with different cuisines in ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1437.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84085081152 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.483333333333 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.2358548083 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.8 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.13333333333 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268962477448 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102212734654 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0962724191941 0.0667982634062 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169310561099 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.08914641488 0.056905535591 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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