Some people believe that sport is an essential part of school life for children, while others feel it should be purely optional. Discuss these opposing views and give your own opinion.
Sport has always been a popular activity. Some believe that schools should include sport in their curriculum as compulsory subject. However, others think that this should be a discretion of children whether they want to opt this or not. Both side of the arguments will be discussed before a conclusion is drawn.
There could be many reasons for people believing that sport is a must for young adults. One of the reasons is that children would want to opt sport as their profession. We have seen many sports stars like Messy or Ronaldo whose passion had always been to become a football players. If we see them now, they are world famous and earning bunch of money and fame all over the globe. Second reason is that children cannot take extra pressure of intellectual education and become frustrated and demotivated. Sports activities keep them active and healthy. An American psychology theory plays a good example here. According to the theory, children are able to pay attention in knowledge education if they are allowed to play some sport. This will eventually affect on their positive grades. Another reason of playing sport is it makes children stronger from outside. Such as some sports like American Football need tough practice and strong physic. If players do not have any of these, they cannot be selected for future games especially when they want to choose this sport as their career. Thus, it is confirmed with the above reasons that sport is very essential in human's life.
On the contrary, if sport is optional then children can devote their time on gaining more knowledgeable education. This will help children to focus on studies only and allow them to choose any desired profession. Moreover, they can opt to do some specialization course to become the champion in the specific field. For example, to become a doctor, MBBS degree is enough, but to become a specialize in any particular cure, they need to do some additional courses and training. If children have a habit of focusing on studies from the school, they can easily achieve their objectives in their later lives.
All in all, after analyzing the both sides of the camps, I prefer that sport should be made compulsory for every school going children as they can produce better results and can proceed with the same sport for their career. Also, it keep them away from stressful environment. Thus, it is recommended that children should continue playing sports.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, second, so, then, thus, for example, such as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 7.85571142285 242% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2039.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 412.0 315.596192385 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94902912621 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50530610838 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50049834792 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 176.041082164 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533980582524 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 621.0 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0721442886 156% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.2133854698 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.56 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.48 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 8.67935871743 219% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233526238964 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0670644779338 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0513572468239 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157240710019 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.049842321392 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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