Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both views.
While there are benefits to enter higher education to guarantee a successful career, there are also good reasons why it might be beneficial to get a job upon graduating from high school. Many people believe that pursuing higher education is the method to get good occupations in the future, whereas others believe that it is better to get a business without taking a bachelor degree.
On the one hand, there are various reasons why several people believe that learning at university or college is the best road to a successful career. Firstly, people who have college degree or Master's degree will have capabilities to progress rapidly in their business. As a result they have high position in firm such as manager or chairman at enterprises. Secondly, the society will develop and become wealthily. It is because the community with high knowledge will create a large number of job and profits.
On the other hand, the option to get a job straight after high school is beneficial in some ways. First, when people take a job earlier, they would earn money to pay their cost of living. Therefore, they will live independently and have responsibilities for their life. In addition, they obtain a lot of real experience. As a result they could enquire high salary for their works.
In conclusion, it seems evident that both learning at the university or college and getting a job upon graduating from high school have their own unique advantages
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, whereas, while, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1203.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 244.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93032786885 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69671819722 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549180327869 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 381.6 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.1778706524 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.5384615385 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7692307692 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9230769231 7.06120827912 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321894562912 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0990355476695 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105254074507 0.0667982634062 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185547277597 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0493365819453 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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