Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child's development while others think that it is important for children to go tot school.
Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your opinoin
A proper education during early ages is very important to shape up the life to face the future. It has always been a constructive arguments or and against a child's curriculum in home and school. In my view, youngsters should attend schools for the betterment of their life, due to the teaching methods and socialization there.
Firstly, the primary colleges will consist of experienced and qualified teachers to structure the education for beginners. The professional teaching methods such as, role plays, teaching trough a play and hand works, will help a gradual improvement in their skills. This will lay a concrete foundation for their higher studies.
Secondly, the play schools will create an environment for socialization. The early teenagers will learn to be social, caring and sharing, which will facilitate to be a good citizen later. Moreover, relationships beyond gender, cast and ethnicity will help to create a better future. Therefore, their attendance to school is important to develop their soft skills.
On the other hand, qualification under the parents' guidance in residence will benefit the development of young adults as well. The father and mothers' fullest attention on the progress of their child will be more beneficial and effective. This will make the child to focus more on their activities without any undue influences from external environment. This will result, in more focus on their career.
When all the above are taken into consideration, in my perspective, schooling is the best environment for a child's development. This is due to the curriculum followed there and relationships with others. this will ultimately result in better performance n their higher studies.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, such as, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1445.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35185185185 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98507719683 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581481481481 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.4741174118 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 85.0 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8823529412 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.29411764706 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139103404012 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0510750406312 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0455312842424 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0892842989688 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0344607355644 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.45 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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