In this modern world, people want their hands on everything they see. That's the trend which is driving the purchase pattern of individuals but when it comes to the buying, they are always confused with the sheer amount of choices they have. It doesn't matter if its a service or good. Some say that price is the most important thing which should be considered when buying something, but I completely disagree with this statement.
People generally have a misconception that, expensive products are good ones and they certainly serve the value for money tag. But it's not true by all means, some products really do justice to their price while others are just creating a false identity in the minds of the end users. There are some other points should keep in mind before taking a buying decision. Firstly, the consumers should check the quality of the product or service by getting feedback from other users. Nowadays they cannot trust these so-called advertisements.
Secondly, the customers should look into contents of the products, whether they are harmful to the user or not by going through the details of the product. Moreover, the durability and after-sales service should be checked if they are going for some electronic products like mobile phones or televisions. Last but not least, in the case of services like medical treatments, the end persons should gather the information about the qualification of the persons who are offering the services. Furthermore, they should also check the facilities that are available in these healthcare centers in order to ensure the quality of their service.
In conclusion, we can not take buying decision entirely depending on one factor. There are plenty of other factors which adding value to a product or services. So before making a final decision about buying something people should consider all the above-mentioned factors. These factors may vary according to the product or service.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: That's
...ant their hands on everything they see. Thats the trend which is driving the purchase...
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...e sheer amount of choices they have. It doesnt matter if its a service or good. Some s...
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
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... choices they have. It doesnt matter if its a service or good. Some say that price ...
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Message: “So before” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... adding value to a product or services. So before making a final decision about buying so...
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Suggestion:
...y according to the product or service.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, may, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1631.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12893081761 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65210699859 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569182389937 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.1634857859 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.9411764706 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7058823529 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76470588235 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233423903493 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.068475221754 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0742075508037 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13530755194 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0482544855642 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.