Some people consider price as most important thing to think about when buying product such as cell phone or service e g medical treatment Do you agree or disagree

Essay topics:

Some people consider price as most important thing to think about when buying product (such as cell phone) or service (e.g. medical treatment). Do you agree or disagree?

There are many factors people count on before purchasing any product or service. The price of them is considered to be one and is vital. I agree that it is always good to check the price of the products and non-essential services in order to avoid regrets later on the decision made.

It is important that people should spend some time to analyse the worth of the product before a purchase of any particular item. For example, two products with the same function, particularly cell phones. The one, being sold at a reasonable price and made of good built-quality, design and features. Whereas, the other one is the flagship one, priced marginally higher compared to the former with state-of-the-art design and unique features. Both the phones will hold the same functionality and thus, it is advised to opt for the reasonable one as far as utilisation is concerned.

However, if the case is different, in terms of health services, there should not be any delay in paying up the bills. For instance, if there is a hospitalisation of the patient on account of a serious disease such as heart vein blockage, one should not do any compromise towards the cost of operation and transplant. Such issues should be addressed immediately as it involves life survival. Money can be earned afterwards the patient comes fit and fine post hospitalisation.

In conclusion, people should not miss an opportunity to rethink buying any product as far as the necessity is not of prime importance. They should also note that, in case of the medical condition, spending on money should not be given a second thought. Hence, it is essential to take decisions wisely.

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Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, second, so, thus, whereas, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1376.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91428571429 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93795534899 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567857142857 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2392094155 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.7333333333 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16568952997 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0535193019919 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0426042530006 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0996370555178 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0501413828049 0.056905535591 88% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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