Some people prefer to eat at restaurants while other prefer to prepare and eat at home. Which one do you prefer?
Give reasons for your answer.
In our modern world, eating out is very prevalent. These days people prefer eating at restaurants or hotels over cooking at home and eating with family. This essay will discuss preparing food at home and eating together with all the family members is always a better way because it is always hygienic, nutritious and it also helps in building good bonding among family members.
Firstly, if somebody cooks food at home, he/she can take care of cleanliness by making sure that the vegetables or fruits are properly washed, utensils being used for cooking and serving are also spick and span. Restaurants do not pay much attention to the cleanliness and the nutrition value of the food. They only believe in presentation and taste of the food. This is the reason people who eat out on frequent basis are more likely to get obese than people who consume food at home. It was observed in a recent study that in the USA, around 60% of the people are obese and one of the major causes of their obesity is that they do not prefer eating home cooked food and always tend to eat out.
In addition to that, preparing and having food at home is always a good choice because it gives you an opportunity to spend more time with your family and thus helps in developing strong relationship among family members. Parents get a chance to be with their offspring and get to know about them, their friends, acquaintances , studies, likes and dislikes which is very crucial in good upbringing of the children. For example, in the eastern world, where parents are closer to their children, the cases of teenagers caught in drug addiction and other kind of abuses are far less than those in the western countries. This attributes to the parents who spend more time with their wards in eastern countries.
So, I strongly recommended preparing and eating food at home with family over going to the restaurants. Occasionally, one can go out and have food at the restaurants, but preference should always be eating at home only.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, so, thus, for example, in addition, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1664.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 350.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75428571429 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48390244359 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525714285714 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.8736780935 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.857142857 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.28571428571 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.351439323029 0.244688304435 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126242570519 0.084324248473 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11485901412 0.0667982634062 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.232105008574 0.151304729494 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0867596285799 0.056905535591 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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