Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Do you agree or not?
Advertisements definitely has changed our lives as compared to the past. People usually attract to the products that have been advertised through various media channels. I agree that people buy some products which are unnecessary but at the same time it can be useful to improve their lives. I will discuss both the views here under.
For a start, every individual has their own transmissions like TV, radio at home and other appliances to watch and listen to and keep update. Almost every business is advertised in order to increase their revenue and therefore, offer mouthwatering deals to attract the customers to buy their products only. People are very self-esteemed and want look completely different from others or want to look superior from others, therefore, they often go for those products they do not really need to have. For example, in Pakistan, on the occasion of Holy Eid, people spend amount on shopping and and visit restaurants to enjoy some delicious buffet. They even buy those products which are waste or/ and of no use and ultimately found themselves in debt.
On the other hand, while keeping updated with the new products that have been advertising on these media channels really bring people much closer to the technology. For instance, cellular phones on one hand can be disaster for young children to waste their time on playing games but on the other hand it can be equally useful such as they can use their cellular phones as a dictionary or can be used for setting up their priorities. In addition to that they can send and receive important e-mails or make conference calls if they are travelling anywhere and are lack of using other devices.
In the end, it depends on every individual how they utilize the product that have been advertised. Either these can be use on unnecessary items and burden themselves in debt or can be used for the betterment of their posterity.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ly Eid, people spend amount on shopping and and visit restaurants to enjoy some delicio...
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... for the betterment of their posterity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, really, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1588.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88615384615 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62157457541 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547692307692 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.3227083379 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.428571429 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2142857143 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92857142857 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162066573721 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0661522874296 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0571425128318 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110031069883 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0754740348067 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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