Some people say that in all levels of education, from primary schools to universities, too much time is spent on learning facts and not enough time on learning practical skills.
Do you agree or disagree?
education which is a primary source for development is very important for our society. Some people believe that in all the education levels from lower school to graduation, it is found that time is spent on learning competitive subjects and not giving time to learn additional skills. however both are necessary for future prospects of life when applying for a job.
it is generally thought that giving university education helps people to apply for jobs such as teacher, doctor, engineer etc. All universities mostly focus on competitive subjects like math, science, literature which helps them for upcoming competitions in jobs and increases economic development of a country.
however, when applying for a business job such as management, leadership and additional skills with high experience and increased interpersonal skills plays an important role. For instance, when applied for a job of a sales person which asks for skills of attracting customers not for education.
I completely believe that including practical skills subject in university education helps students to become more confident and increases communication skills, leadership’s skills and inter-personal skills required for any job applied further.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 41.998997996 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1051.0 1615.20841683 65% => OK
No of words: 185.0 315.596192385 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.68108108108 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11383256624 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 176.041082164 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610810810811 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 324.0 506.74238477 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.1044462816 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.375 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.125 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122377612602 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0686865264927 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.135678460505 0.0667982634062 203% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0836639182758 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102931897759 0.056905535591 181% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.96 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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