Some people say that attendance should be made compulsory in educational institutions. Others believe that it should be optional. Which of these two views do you support and why?
This is a universally acknowledged fact that schools and colleges play prominent role to learn subjects up to great extent. However, nowadays one can get attainment without go to educational institution such as online learning and smart classes. It is believed that attendance have to made mandatory so that nobody can ignore the presence in a class. These points of view will be discussed in the forthcoming paragraphs.
First of all, it is undoubtedly true that there is no substitute of regular teaching even in this contemporary era. The students who are studying at school level probably they are not mature fair enough to become responsible regarding their study. Thus, they can miss classes if attendance would be made optional which may lead to failure during examination process. For instance, according to recent survey of Times of India, there are more students who usually miss their classes in a colleges in contrast to school level where attendance rules are followed by strict rules and regulations.
Furthermore, it is certainly true that students can easily led astray and can indulge in anti-social activities. So, there will be more prone to nefarious activities. What is more, they can learn a lot through interaction and can enhance enormous skills while studying in a classroom like team-work, leadership and so on. Therefore, it is a big reason that many thinkers gravitate towards this phenomenon.
To sum up, I completely coincide with this proposition that the attendance should be essential in all educational institutions so that nobody can ignore their class which is helpful to build brighter foreseeable future of all learners.
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first, furthermore, however, if, may, regarding, so, therefore, thus, while, for instance, in contrast, such as, first of all, in contrast to, to sum up, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1405.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26217228464 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93951424793 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625468164794 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.8990182535 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.076923077 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5384615385 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.7692307692 7.06120827912 181% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138196144503 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0510371720528 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0610106574579 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0902752380607 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0474319144528 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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