Some people say that health care should be the responsibility of the government but others think that people should be responsible for their own health.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Owing to the health-related issues some reckoned that should government should actively play a role in ensuring a healthy lifestyle, rather, others believe that it is individuals' sole decision how they should live. As far as my opinion is concerned, I believe that health is basically individual responsibility, even though there are lots of things that the government can do to promote a healthy lifestyle as the health of citizens is paramount.
The government should make laws to ban things that are detrimental to the health of the people. The junk food contributes, in no small measure, to deteriorate an individual's health hence, the government should impose a heavy tax on such foods in order to decrease their consumption. Additionally, intake of any kind of drug should be banned and this move will find consonance with the rest of the world where several nations, also harshly banned these drugs. For instance, the government of Gujrat had legally banned the consumption of alcohol for many years. The government should deploy regulation for mandatory vaccinations, which can save millions of children from the clutches of diseases and death.
While saying, health is very much individual matter means that the government cannot monitor the lifestyle of every citizen. Even after knowing the consequences of eating junk food and spending a huge amount of time in front of the television and computer, they are too lazy and ignorant to change their sedentary lifestyle. Apart from this, the busy schedules of office in the other basic reason behind the ignorance of people toward their personal lifestyle. In such a case, the government cannot help.
To conclude, the government can take certain measures to ensure the health of their people, however, it cannot alone create a healthy society, hence, an individual need to make conscious efforts to.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 163, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
... in no small measure, to deteriorate an individuals health hence, the government should imp...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, while, apart from, for instance, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1569.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21262458472 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82472140287 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584717607973 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.0313694893 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.75 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0833333333 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275477713961 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0961763468206 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0492404672443 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151049302839 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0610778883427 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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