Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person’s culture and character from their choice of clothes. Do you agree or disagree?

Essay topics:

Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person’s culture and character from their choice of clothes. Do you agree or disagree?

From my everyday experience and observation, I will analyze the topic of depicting human behaviors and there whereabouts through their dresses. I am not surprised to see that people think that their believes and personality can truly be described from their clothing. I do agree with the same statement. The logic behind this growing topic of predicting culture is the weather that affects on attires. And, person's outfit represents their sense of maturity.

The environment plays significant role in people's dresses. For example, in Russia, temperature of minus 30 is an average cold for the Russians. In such weather, people wear fur coats, dear skin shoes and three or four layers of clothes. It is observed that people enjoy ice creams and other cold beverages in this severe cold. In addition to that, in Pakistan, Northern areas are mostly covered with clouds. There is very limited time where the weather is slightly hotter than other months. The traditional clothes they wear are hand-made woolen sweaters and warm caps or hats in order to survive in severe cold. Consequently, the outfits reflect the culture of any country.

Classic attire portrays decency and maturity level. For instance, recently, I have witnessed many people wearing blue suits with brown shoes and brown belt in their professional careers. This outfit shows the sensibility and patience in their personal and proficient environment. Having said that, some people like to wear fancy clothes all year around irrespective of any specific occasion. Such people seem overexcited and more extrovert than others. Considering such facts, characters can be explored easily while examining different clothing styles.

At the conclusion of my essay, I would agree that clothing describing people's values, beliefs and as well as their character. Clothes greatly affect from different atmosphere as well as people's attitude. If anyone wants to know someone well, then, these are the two important things which could help to judge them better.

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Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, so, then, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1703.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.321875 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63287323743 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.653125 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.8024404958 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.4090909091 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5454545455 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.13636363636 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199770050883 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0523186549576 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0437295377673 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116802073911 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0544882432738 0.056905535591 96% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.98 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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