Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to the cinema Others say that to be fully enjoyed films need to be seen in a cinema Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, people can watch videos and films on their smartphone or tablets because of the development of technology. However, there is a fair amount of people support the idea that it is better to enjoy films in a cinema rather than to watch on personal devices. In my sentiment, I totally with this argument. This essay is going to discuss both opinions and argues why I support this argument.
On the one hand, I agree that movies could be watched from home on personal devices such as smartphones or tablets due to two reasons. Firstly, the cost to watch a film on the Internet is cheaper than the ticket in cinemas. For example, individuals only need to pay $10 per month to subscribe to Netflix, and then they can enjoy thousands of titles from Film Netflix store instead of spending $15 per movie in a cinema. Secondly, family members could seat comfortably anywhere in their home to watch movie like living room or bedroom.
Although watching movies at home is affordable and giving comfortable for some people, however, I believe, movies should be enjoyed in the cinema because of two reasons. Firstly, cinema will bring best experience for the films from sounds or images to interacted aspects. The theater always equip the huge screens with high resolution and high-end speakers that bring clear and great quality of images and sound to audiences. In addition, some 3D movies like Avatar, there is a special glass equipped in order to give better experience of watching the movie. Secondly, most of the new titles will be released in cinemas first before publishing on Internet channels like Netflix. Hence, people who are fan of blockbuster movies can enjoy it immediately.
In conclusion, while many people do prefer seating at home to enjoy the movies from television or their personal device, I am in favor of going to cinema to watch new titles and to have best experience about the movie.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 694, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...et channels like Netflix. Hence, people who are fan of blockbuster movies can enjoy it ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, however, second, secondly, so, then, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1586.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86503067485 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56311793782 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533742331288 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0149469562 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.733333333 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7333333333 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218510772454 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0745143746102 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0462219766967 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133656016696 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0370731991256 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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