Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language.
It is thought by some people that we should know at least one second language, except our native. That’s why foreign language is essential in high schools and universities curriculums, despite the fact the pupils or students may stay in Ukraine in the future. Moreover, in my country children start to learn English or German languages from the very young age. In my humble opinion, such practice only benefits us.
First of all, people ought to remember that a lot of decent job positions require a particular language knowledge. There are companies in my country that cooperate with different associations from any part of the world. To give a clear example, the “Arcellor Mitall” manufacturing is located in Kriviy Rih city. There is mandatory intermediate English even for a fitter position!
There is also a bunch of other advantages, such as ability to watch movies in original language without translation. I think that films interpretations distract our attention from many important things in movie. Buy the way, I can hear a lot of translation mistakes, while I’m watching TV.
In addition, I would like to say that English and French music are very popular in my country. It seems funny that people like to listen to the music and don’t understand a lyrics of a song.
In conclusion, I want to say that even if you don’t want to travel abroad, to work in foreign country you need to learn at least one second language. We need to fill free spaces of our brain in order to comprehend something new. Psychologists like to say “to do a mind training”. Such practice will only benefit our health and it’s necessary for every one of us.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 177, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a lyric' or simply 'lyrics'?
Suggestion: a lyric; lyrics
... to the music and don't understand a lyrics of a song. In conclusion, I want to sa...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'first', 'if', 'may', 'moreover', 'second', 'so', 'while', 'at least', 'i think', 'in addition', 'in conclusion', 'such as', 'first of all']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.24347826087 0.247107183377 99% => OK
Verbs: 0.127536231884 0.155533422707 82% => OK
Adjectives: 0.095652173913 0.0946595960268 101% => OK
Adverbs: 0.031884057971 0.0501214627716 64% => OK
Pronouns: 0.063768115942 0.0437548338989 146% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.130434782609 0.122226691241 107% => OK
Participles: 0.00869565217391 0.0403226058552 22% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.94945181663 2.80594681477 105% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0434782608696 0.0326793684256 133% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0608695652174 0.0861772015684 71% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0173913043478 0.021408717616 81% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00579710144928 0.011925033212 49% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1692.0 1933.35771543 88% => OK
No of words: 284.0 316.048096192 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.95774647887 6.12580529183 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20517956788 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.352112676056 0.374742101984 94% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.271126760563 0.28420135186 95% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.197183098592 0.203846283523 97% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.137323943662 0.137316102897 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94945181663 2.80594681477 105% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.037074148 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609154929577 0.56093040696 109% => OK
Word variations: 67.1626005435 60.7387585426 111% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0891783567 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.7058823529 20.7743622355 80% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.2764406074 49.517814964 57% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5294117647 127.492653851 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7058823529 20.7743622355 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.823529411765 0.814263465372 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.99599198397 25% => OK
Readability: 43.8185584093 49.1944974215 89% => OK
Elegance: 1.71428571429 1.69124875643 101% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.456442657597 0.332605444948 137% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0846255465817 0.102741220458 82% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0685409574161 0.0668466124924 103% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.512943565415 0.534860350844 96% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.138158635933 0.148594505496 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145092814939 0.134430193775 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.083352102882 0.0742795772207 112% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.264893009164 0.324371583561 82% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0816010106073 0.0638462369009 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.265851448642 0.228012699653 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0869853849878 0.058150111329 150% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.68436873747 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.41683366733 146% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 5.90881763527 102% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 1.9629258517 255% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 10.4468937876 115% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.