Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
People argue that the main reason evolve around learning other languages are due to frequent mobility from one country to another country either for mobility or for work purposes. While others have contentions that other factors are also encouraging people to seek foreign languages. I also believe that work and travel are the reasons of learning foreign languages. The author will discuss both the views and put his opinion forward as well.
Undoubtedly, people nowadays are habitual of travelling than in the past. This could be for leisure activities, advance studies or for business commitments. Having command on international language help people to easily communicate to the foreign people. Nevertheless, some countries feel offended if you do not speak their language. As a personal experience, I visited Italy and there I went to a restaurant. I saw a menu board hanging on the wall with menus written in English and same was translated in their Italian. At the bottom they wrote that please see the translation and order your food in Italian language. It seemed to me that they were not welcoming the people who do not speak their language. Foreign language is therefore now equally important as English to make your life more comfortable.
As far as work is concern, people migrate other countries for work opportunities that are offering by the government of that country or the employer who has established their business in that country. For example, in Sweden, if you have a good knowledge of Swedish than you certainly have an edge over others even though your opponent has higher qualification. Not just that but it also helps you get promotions in your work environment. Let's say you are working in a sales department and you need to persuade your clients to use your company products. So now there is a greater chance that you influence your customers if you have that language skill. Eventually more customers from your end means more profit and ultimately appraisals.
However, personal interest is also could be the reason convincing people to learn the other international languages. Like many education institutions are now commencing the classes of international languages. These languages are not compulsory but all are welcome to participate. These inductions entice students or older people to initiate these courses and learn them with interest. These people believe that there is no certain age of learning.
I believe that work and travel covers all the situation. There is no specific reason for people to study International tongues. Having said that interest does not count in necessary items so therefore should be excluded. Interest itself can be developed by using these languages in their daily lives.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...e courses and learn them with interest. These people believe that there is no certain...
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...at there is no certain age of learning. I believe that work and travel covers al...
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...erest does not count in necessary items so therefore should be excluded. Interest itself can...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 54.0 24.0651302605 224% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2307.0 1615.20841683 143% => OK
No of words: 446.0 315.596192385 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17264573991 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5955099915 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80959955602 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 176.041082164 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526905829596 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 726.3 506.74238477 143% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 16.0721442886 174% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.6667425898 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.3928571429 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9285714286 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.75 7.06120827912 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 8.67935871743 196% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.351751054897 0.244688304435 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0841578911286 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0644785187759 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184929420644 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0696406639363 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.41 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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