Some people say a person’s success in adult life is the result of the way they brought up as a child by their parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is said that success in mature life is the outcome of fostering a child by their parents. I completely disagree with this statement. To become successful in life, talent and hard work are important, not the facilities offered by parents at a young age.
First of all, achievement is impossible without understanding the task deeply and talent helps in this regard. Mark Zuckerburg, the owner of Facebook, is a good example of this. Before him, many people have just given the idea about this social media platform, but Mark has launched it for the world. Though his parents wanted to get him involved in their family business, Mark was not interested at all. If the target is understood properly, then it is not impossible to achieve that and childhood fostering or parents’ role is very limited in this case.
Secondly, without hard work, it is difficult to have success. For example, Bill Gates has worked very hard to build Microsoft, after couple of years, he has become a successful entrepreneur. In his childhood, he had not received much help from his parents, but he got early age success.
Finally, parents are important part of human life and their guidance is necessary for the wellbeing of their children but accomplishment does not solely depend on it.
In conclusion, ability and great effort are the result of a person’s success. In my opinion, parents try to bring up their young charges in way so that they can have success in their life. But early age facilities have a little effect regarding achievements of a winner. Hunger for success always leads a man to his victory.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ess always leads a man to his victory.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, then, well, for example, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1347.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91605839416 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76991911712 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.598540145985 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.7536456364 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.1875 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.125 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8125 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200070656393 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0663892096263 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0712559043209 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116911346554 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.073780924196 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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