Some people think that children's free time must include educational
activities, otherwise they will waste their time. What is your opinion?
To start with, it is a well-known fact that some parents believe that it is much better for schoolchildren if they do some extra study on in their free time. I am partly agree with this statement, let us try to discus this issue down below.
On the one hand, it is absolutely a good idea to force the kids to education via some special activities like painting, sculpture and others, so they will get better results at school. For example, i know one family, they used to push their kids’ all free time to study, even if they played some simple games, parents were trying to teach as much as possible. What is more, those kids finished their school with the best grades and they are studying now at the one of the best Universities in my Country.
On the other hand, a number of other people believe, that youth has its right to spend their free time as they want. To say more, too much of education might be depressing for children so they will lose any interest to study at school or in a kindergarten. For example, when i was a kid, my parents used to push me to study math every day, so i started to hate that subject so much. In other words, it might lead to an adverse effect in studying process.
In conclusion, i would like to say, that education is a very important, but what is worse, that over-estimation of studying. In their childhood children should have more entertainment than routine learning, as this is the role of parents to share these activities.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'if', 'so', 'well', 'for example', 'in conclusion', 'in other words', 'to start with', 'what is more', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.195439739414 0.247107183377 79% => OK
Verbs: 0.162866449511 0.155533422707 105% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0846905537459 0.0946595960268 89% => OK
Adverbs: 0.042345276873 0.0501214627716 84% => OK
Pronouns: 0.071661237785 0.0437548338989 164% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.127035830619 0.122226691241 104% => OK
Participles: 0.0228013029316 0.0403226058552 57% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.55590399911 2.80594681477 91% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0521172638436 0.0326793684256 159% => OK
Particles: 0.00325732899023 0.00163938923432 199% => OK
Determiners: 0.0944625407166 0.0861772015684 110% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0195439739414 0.021408717616 91% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00977198697068 0.011925033212 82% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1482.0 1933.35771543 77% => OK
No of words: 271.0 316.048096192 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46863468635 6.12580529183 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20517956788 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.247232472325 0.374742101984 66% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.177121771218 0.28420135186 62% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.125461254613 0.203846283523 62% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0848708487085 0.137316102897 62% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55590399911 2.80594681477 91% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.037074148 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568265682657 0.56093040696 101% => OK
Word variations: 58.2862938475 60.7387585426 96% => OK
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0891783567 68% => OK
Sentence length: 24.6363636364 20.7743622355 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.7153862906 49.517814964 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.727272727 127.492653851 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6363636364 20.7743622355 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.909090909091 0.814263465372 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 3.99599198397 200% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 42.3485407581 49.1944974215 86% => OK
Elegance: 1.24705882353 1.69124875643 74% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202653994727 0.332605444948 61% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.088969815307 0.102741220458 87% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0507556684478 0.0668466124924 76% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.594652674477 0.534860350844 111% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.0973564313922 0.148594505496 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0910581114449 0.134430193775 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0723457094805 0.0742795772207 97% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.293433804722 0.324371583561 90% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0578999357299 0.0638462369009 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144336894564 0.228012699653 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0284327390734 0.058150111329 49% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.68436873747 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.41683366733 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 6.0 5.90881763527 102% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.5751503006 155% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 1.9629258517 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 10.0 10.4468937876 96% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.