Some people think that the government should be responsible for crime prevention, while others believe that it is the responsibility of the individual to protect themselves.
Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
While some are of the viewpoint that curbing criminal activities is the sole responsibility of the government, others are of the belief that each person should be responsible for their safety and protection. In my viewpoint, the government has a greater responsibility to keep a check on criminal acts by enforcing strict laws. Having said that, citizens should also need to do whatever they can in order to ensure their safety.
To begin with, some people are of the thought that one must take care of his or her safety as police cannot be present everywhere at all times and this is true. For instance, theft can occur anytime at any shop. Hence, it is the duty of the shop owner to keep the shop secure by installing security alarms, appointing guard for safety or installing cameras as police cannot be present all time to prevent the incidents. Additionally, customers should also take care of their belonging to ensure that they should not be robbed. Such measures can prevent many criminal activities from occurring. Thus, it is evident that each individual has a responsibility to ensure their safety.
However, there is a limit to what a person can do to keep themselves safe. Only the government can enforce robust laws to keep the crime rate in check. Stringent laws will act as a deterrent and dampen the crime rate to a great extent. For example, in the Middle east the punishment for each and every crime is so harsh that people do not dare to break any law, as a result the crime rate of the Middle Eastern countries is very low as compared to the whole world. On the contrary, in India the crime rate is increasing year after year because the laws here are lenient enough and more often criminals are left off very easily. Unfortunately, this encourages others to commit crimes. Hence, the state own up the responsibility and enforce vigorous laws that will discourage people from committing any crimes.
To conclude, both individuals and the government have the responsibility to prevent the crime from occurring. People can do whatever they can do to ensure their safety, although the government should enact strict laws to restrict people from committing offences.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, as a result, in my view, on the contrary, to begin with, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1818.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 373.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87399463807 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72033822621 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.487935656836 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 582.3 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.0254131945 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.0 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7222222222 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.77777777778 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270890004408 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0870627951009 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0750639264084 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177921403095 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0421323051378 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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