Some people think that the government should invest more money in teaching
science than other subjects to make progress. Do you agree or disagree?
The kind of growth and development observed in the science sector has seized the attention of
certain individuals, and they believe that the government should allot more funds for science
subjects over other subjects. Since scientific development is essential for a country, I can't
entirely disagree with allotting significant funds for science subjects. In the following
paragraphs, I shall explain why it is necessary to allocate more funds for science subjects.
It is undeniable that science has contributed to the development of the whole world. It has also
improved the quality of life by introducing new electrical and computer systems. For example,
with the help of a computer system, we can now work efficiently. It has helped us discover
various ways to resolve issues like fossil energy extinction by introducing renewable energy.
Moreover, it has also made life easier for people by producing electrical appliances such as
washing machines, refrigerators, and other appliances.
Moreover, there are numerous reasons why governments should allot more money into teaching
science to boost the country and society's functions. Such as youngsters who are equipped with
fundamental knowledge related to science, will be able to broaden their own knowledge to
discover something new. By allocating more funds to science, the government can improve its
scope of research in fields such as medicine and astronomy, which will help the country prosper.
Although the study of other subjects such as arts and commerce also contribute to the national
interest, science has an unimpeachable position.
To summarise, science has made significant developments in the past few years, which is the
reason why I believe that the government should allocate more funds for science subjects.
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...rical and computer systems. For example, with the help of a computer system, we c...
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...k efficiently. It has helped us discover various ways to resolve issues like foss...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, for example, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1540.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.57971014493 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95379420933 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.54347826087 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8576525251 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.461538462 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2307692308 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.46153846154 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 20.0 4.38176352705 456% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199303838003 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0726183932501 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.068879029474 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0619881781532 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0575148011748 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.08 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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