Some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and that this money could be better spent elsewhere.
To what extent do you agree with this view?
Spending money on a particular sector is a crucial decision to be taken by the government which could significantly affect the society. Some believe that nowadays the government is investing the fund in the art which is nothing but wastage of valuable resources which if invested in other sectors, could be proved to be more useful. Others believe that arts being an indispensable part of human race, worthy to get more fund. I believe that the government should spend reasonably.
On one hand, the government should and is investing fund for nourishing the art which is very vital for the development of humankind. Artifacts created by artists are essential for the preservation of the heritage which can be very useful for the young generation. For example, plays of the great writer Shakespear are very enlighting for the mankind. Secondly, artistic skills like painting, acting, dancing are good for the human community to nurture the society. For instance, the human can feel relax when it indulge in these activities. Thus it is very clear this area of arts is worth to spend to flourish the habitat on this planet.
On the other hand, some people believe it would be more beneficial for the human race to spend the funds in other areas like the science and humanitarian aid. The first point to make is that scientific research in fields like medical, astronomy and engineering are very crucial for this earth. For example, the invention of medicines for diseases like AIDS is very imperative for the human being. Another point is that there are many dilemmas on this mother earth that are worthwhile. For instance, the crime rate has been increasing worldwide; similarly, the poverty rate is also growing day by day. From all these arguments, it is crystal clear that the scientific research and helping underprivileged are substantial areas to be considered by all the authorities of the world.
To sum up, the importance of spending on the art is not deniable, although there are more issues to fight for survival on this planet.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'if', 'second', 'secondly', 'similarly', 'so', 'thus', 'while', 'as to', 'for example', 'for instance', 'to sum up', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.222811671088 0.247107183377 90% => OK
Verbs: 0.16976127321 0.155533422707 109% => OK
Adjectives: 0.106100795756 0.0946595960268 112% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0397877984085 0.0501214627716 79% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0132625994695 0.0437548338989 30% => OK
Prepositions: 0.140583554377 0.122226691241 115% => OK
Participles: 0.0477453580902 0.0403226058552 118% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.73439858663 2.80594681477 97% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0291777188329 0.0326793684256 89% => OK
Particles: 0.0026525198939 0.00163938923432 162% => OK
Determiners: 0.119363395225 0.0861772015684 139% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0185676392573 0.021408717616 87% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0212201591512 0.011925033212 178% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2046.0 1933.35771543 106% => OK
No of words: 343.0 316.048096192 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.96501457726 6.12580529183 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20517956788 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.31778425656 0.374742101984 85% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.268221574344 0.28420135186 94% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.198250728863 0.203846283523 97% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.134110787172 0.137316102897 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73439858663 2.80594681477 97% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.037074148 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501457725948 0.56093040696 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 52.2376214409 60.7387585426 86% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0891783567 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.1764705882 20.7743622355 97% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.8201968893 49.517814964 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.352941176 127.492653851 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1764705882 20.7743622355 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.882352941176 0.814263465372 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 3.99599198397 100% => OK
Readability: 46.9986280226 49.1944974215 96% => OK
Elegance: 1.84523809524 1.69124875643 109% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.361450245833 0.332605444948 109% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.133842845336 0.102741220458 130% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.070513376713 0.0668466124924 105% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.576280711401 0.534860350844 108% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.162355842966 0.148594505496 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.161188247813 0.134430193775 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0653095620042 0.0742795772207 88% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.464328423598 0.324371583561 143% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.120086644514 0.0638462369009 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.264030903871 0.228012699653 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0520797712444 0.058150111329 90% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.68436873747 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.41683366733 59% => OK
Positive topic words: 11.0 5.90881763527 186% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 1.9629258517 102% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 10.4468937876 134% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.