Some people think that it is necessary to travel abroad to learn about other countries, but others think that it is not necessary to travel abroad because all the information can be seen on TV and the internet. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In the last few decades, the amount of interest to learn about new culture has ramped up among the people. Strata of the populace reiterate that traveling to other nations in order to learn about their culture and religion is important. Contrarily, opponents deem that it is traveling to other nations is worthless as nowadays everything is available on the internet and television. In my opinion, by visiting the other nation one can better understand the country. This essay will discuss both the opinion in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, the revolution in the field of technology has greatly impacted the lives of the human being as now one can easily learn anything while sitting home with the use of the internet. The Internet is known as a knowledge hub where one can search for any required knowledge and also can interact with people who share the same interest as of him but belonging to different nations. This enables them to learn new cultures, languages, and traditions by making friends from other countries. On the other hand, television is also now playing a great role in learning about other nations especially about the kitchen because different food programs are channelized with subtitles and comic books are also telecasted with English subtitles which helps one to learn about them.
On the flip side, by visiting the place one can easily understand the different cultures of the country. Firstly, they will get more chances to practice the language and will get the actual environment which will give them numerous opportunities to learn new things. Apart from this, learning speed increases because of the prevailing atmosphere and an individual will come across the actual facts and figure. However, in the television or on the internet sometimes fake information is shown. For instance, the survey done by “the time” reveals that learning about the country by a visit there is 67 percent more efficient than learning while sitting at home.
To conclude, no doubt both have different pros and cons but in my opinion, visiting the country is a better opinion as this will provide a person actual environment to learn and practice the culture and language of the country.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 294, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to speed'
Suggestion: to speed
...n new things. Apart from this, learning speed increases because of the prevailing atm...
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Line 4, column 386, Rule ID: ACTUAL_EXPERIENCE[1]
Message: Use simply 'facts'.
Suggestion: facts
... and an individual will come across the actual facts and figure. However, in the television ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, so, while, apart from, for instance, no doubt, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1852.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 367.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04632152589 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61980846951 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.512261580381 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 579.6 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.5678922857 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.466666667 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4666666667 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.93333333333 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227658600402 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0798634095426 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0372067825886 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137666070164 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0547383701914 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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