Some people think that it is necessary to travel abroad to learn about other countries, but others think that it is not necessary to travel abroad because all the information can be seen on TV and the internet. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, people are keen on learning about new cultures and languages. Strata of the populace reiterate that moving to aboard is the most efficient method of learning about the nations. Contrarily, opponent deems that one can easily learn everything through the use of the internet and television. In my viewpoint, the former way is better to learn about other nations. This essay will discuss both the opinions in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, firstly, by visiting the desired nation one comes in direct contact with the culture and people of the country. This means that an individual is exposed to the environment of that particular nation and get lots of opportunities to practice whatever he learned from there. Moreover, they learn effectively and grab the knowledge with the practical example by interviewing others and gathering data in order to enhance their knowledge. For instance, the survey done by “the time “reveals that around 10 percent of students migrate to Canada from all over the world with average fluency in English but in less than a year time period they become 78 percent efficient in the English language.
On the other hand, the internet and television are inexpensive ways to learn about other countries. The internet is known as the knowledge hub as one can learn and grab any sorts from knowledge with the use of this technology. Online classes are provided by the different institutes which enable students to learn while sitting at home. Apart from this, different social media platforms at the best sources to interact for those who share the same interests but belongs to different cultures and nations. However, the television is at its best because different nations' programs are channelized using English subtitles which enable one to learn the language and understand about the culture of the nation. For instance, most prominent programs which are watched are kitchen recipes from all over the globe, and all possess to have subtitles in the native language.
To conclude, no doubt television and the internet are cost-efficient ways to learn new cultures but traveling to other nations' pros cannot be overlooked because of the cost. By personally visit the nation gives a person a chance to interact and learn more effectively.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, look, moreover, so, while, apart from, for instance, no doubt, in my view, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 41.998997996 152% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1922.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 373.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1528150134 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68002128157 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522788203753 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 602.1 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.9177687235 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.058823529 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9411764706 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.29411764706 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182866731272 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0667640780503 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523107170846 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122469387514 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0493679473431 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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