Some people think that job satisfaction is more important than job security, while some people think that they cannot always expect job satisfaction, a permanent job is more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In this contemporary era, having a highly paid job is as important as a long term job. Satisfaction from the work has to be more important in our life compared to having a job said by many, however, others are against it. I would discuss both views and give my opinion in the coming paragraph.
Firstly, many people in this highly competitive society are admired for fulfillment from their work, and they work hard over the clock to get what they desired. Having a satisfactory job does not mean that it is a long-term job. Few are not worried about their work security and spend most of their time to complete tasks, work, and finish projects ahead of due time. Many employees, for instance, have lost their jobs cause of their mentality to accomplish work satisfaction. Nevertheless, undoubtedly, for those who are trying to work around the clock for any company, it gives them a belief that their job is more protected compared to those who are working at the company only for money.
On the other hand, nowadays, the masses are worrying about the source of income to fulfill their requirements, needs, and secure their future rather than considering other aspects available at the organization. A permanent job with good pay would be sweeter than job satisfaction for some human being. Having a long-term, secure job would make an employee live in a comfortable zone and makes them blind about the main aim of their life about the work they are doing for a long time. Few who do not have any good skills and get jobs by luck would prefer to stay on that job as long as they can.
In conclusion, having a satisfied or permanent long-term work all depends on the situation and everyone's mentality about their job. I would prefer the first case if I am doing well at work and also contributing my effort to the organization's progress, then I convince myself that I have less or none chances to get fired or laid off by the institute.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, nevertheless, so, then, well, as to, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1600.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6511627907 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62553916789 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529069767442 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.6853035899 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.285714286 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5714285714 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.78571428571 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269035491848 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120349653444 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.087100319058 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185734210692 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103364618033 0.056905535591 182% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 50.2224549098 128% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.99 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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