Some people think that to lead a successful life a university degree is important. Others believe that this is no longer true nowadays. Discuss both views and give your own opinion
You often face many challenges in your life and most of them are related to your career. Therefore, in order to overcome the hurdles it is necessary to ace in studies. However, concentrating on education only will not give you enough sense of overcoming the tough situation. I also agree with the statement and also like to put the reasons forward to support my arguments.
To embark upon, education will give you the sensibility of judgment where you can differentiate about the good and bad or true and wrong. This can happen as universities teach different subjects and give an overall idea about the global phenomena. Also, university life provide you opportunity to come across different people from different backgrounds, beliefs, perceptions and skills. While spending time with them we learn some important aspects of life such as the motivation factor or problem solutions which help in career growth and as well as improve cognitive skills.
However, on the other hand, experience will give you the exact idea of how to implement those ideas and also how good you can exercise your judgments. Taking an example of the trade skill workers such as plumbing, mechanic or carpenter. These skills do not require higher qualification and a diploma course would do it for them. So, after receiving the diploma it is entirely depend on them that how they execute their knowledge and skills into their work.
To elucidate, education is a must for everyone at certain level as a reputed company will not hire you unless you have required knowledge to meet their requirements and simultaneously they require employees to have the prior experience in the same field so that they do not need to invest much amount to teach and retain the skills.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, therefore, well, while, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1459.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9795221843 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70689563006 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597269624573 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.9388424168 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.230769231 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5384615385 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53846153846 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0965961720978 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0354240775662 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.036819654959 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0554862329173 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0447836998609 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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