Some people think that strict punishments for driving offences are the key to reducing traffic accidents. Others, however, believe that other measures would be more effective in improving road safety. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
Nowadays, the number of accidents increases dramatically due to several reasons such as the drivers or the road condition. There is a fair amount of people think that the serious punishments are effective solutions to reduce this trend while so many residents believe that this issue could be tackled in the different ways. In my opinion, the government need to implement both opinions to address this problem. This essay is going to discuss both ideas.
On the one hand, I understand why citizens agree with developing and implementing the strict punishments to eliminate traffic accidents. There are two main factors contributing extremely to current traffic accident cases. Firstly, it causes from the drivers who are drunk. 60 percent of the cases relate to the alcohol, according to the recent report of the USA. Additionally, 30 percent of the accident cases caused by driving over the speed limit. Therefore, the government should introduce the strict penalties to the drivers who tend to drink or drive over the speed limit.
On the other hand, there are possible solutions that the authority can introduce to the public to remove the problem. Providing a safety driving class every month to all drivers is one of the measures that can be considered, for example, a mandatory online course to remind the strict rules and the essential requirement while driving is one of the topics. Furthermore, the authority should consider reducing the speed limit such as from 110 kilometres per hour in highway to 90 kilometres per hour.
In conclusion, this essay argued both aspects that can be effective solutions to increase the road safety. While people think the serious penalties are main solution for the issue, I believe that this will be only addressed by applying multiple methods.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, in fact, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1499.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11604095563 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70085578151 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546075085324 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.9966221081 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.9333333333 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5333333333 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.2 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239674224959 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.068153289805 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0406245431074 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133573476869 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0312216330868 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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