Some people think that success is the best measure of intelligence, while others think that intelligence can be measured in other ways. What is your opinion?
It is true that success and intelligence are interrelated with each other. Therefore, in many tasks high skills are required in order to get succeed. However, intelligence can also be measured with other various ways. This essay will analyse both the views by using ample evidence from the successful businessmen of current era and the role of United Nation in resolving the conflicts of International Disputes.
To begin with, we have many examples to support the arguments of intelligence behind the success. Taking the examples of Bill Gates, the pioneer of Microsoft and Mark Zuckerberg, the founder of Facebook. Nevertheless, they both were college dropouts but succeeded using extraordinary skills. One has become the richest person of this planet and other become the billionaire in no time. However, it should not be forgotten that only intelligence did not bring success to them but the enthusiasm and being eager beaver became their strength.
Other factors should also be considered in measuring intelligence. For instance, United Nation often play significant role in resolving the disputes of two countries. The very two old rival countries India and Pakistan still have conflict of interest over Kashmir and still remain unsolved. Albeit, United Nations still not being successful to remove this political tensions but intelligently handling both the countries on intervals to refrain from war.
In my opinion intelligence should only not be measured with the success rate but how confidently handling the current situation matters as well. If counting the intelligence mere on success then only a few percentage of examples would be identified which I suppose is unfair.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, nevertheless, so, still, then, therefore, thus, well, for instance, i suppose, in my opinion, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1430.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39622641509 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89460282683 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615094339623 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.2376153909 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.3333333333 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.53333333333 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255613132833 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0931439373506 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104770413124 0.0667982634062 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158561497965 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0432841502967 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.74 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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