Some people think the technology makes life complex, so we should make the life simpler without using the technology. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, the technology develops very fast, so there is a fair amount of people think that the technology which makes their life more complicated. The residents can live without the technology to make the life more comfortable. In my opinion, I completely disagree with this dilemma. This essay is going to discuss why I have this opinion.
On the one hand, I understand why there is a group of people who agree with the argument. Firstly, they do not feel comfortable with the technology or the modern devices such as a laptop or a smartphone which are too complicated for them. For instance, senior citizens who have a limitation to learn and remember a new thing. Additionally, there is another group that does not willing to accept the change will find it difficult to learn a new technology. Consequently, they will think the technology is complex and make their life harder.
On the other one, there are several reasons that encourage me to totally disagree with the argument. Firstly, the technology makes the life even simpler, such as an instant communication via a cellphone or any chat messenger. Additionally, people will not get lost while travelling to an unfamiliar country because they can use Google Maps or other software to support navigation. Therefore, instead of removing the technology from the world, we should take advantage of them to create an easier life.
In conclusion, while so many people think the technology which leads them to the complication should be reduced, I completely with that and do believe that the technology brings more comfort to our lives and this should be accepted.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, if, so, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1353.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9926199262 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86061885049 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546125461255 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3647350226 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.6428571429 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3571428571 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.64285714286 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.387191500206 0.244688304435 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126293911785 0.084324248473 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117916138457 0.0667982634062 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.225732546655 0.151304729494 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0516545974526 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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