Some people think that when recruiting, companies should aim to take on people who are innovative and able to work independently while others considered they should recruit people who are able to work in a team and follow instructions.Discuss both view and give your opinion.
My writing
It is thought by some that independence in working is the priority quality that every employer are looking for, on the other hand, people who can easily work in a team are said to be the necessary ones. From my point of view, both of sides have their own advantages to support their points, I won't take side and be sure that the readiness of changes is the most crucial one.
On the one hand, we need to admit that every job, every environment requires employees to be able to work as a team in order to have the best productivity. No matter what occupation you work, teamwork skill helps us a lot in getting on good terms with not only co-workers but also our boss which is very advantageous for us in building a comfortable and effective place to work. Lastly, it helps every employees has to push themselves to catch up with others and learns from partners' mistakes and experiences in order to set up a strong and competitive company.
On the other hand, a job has a variety kind of works, the employees not only have to work in a group frequently but they need to solve their problems on their own as well. It is obvious that nobody can help and decide for our life everything in the long run, in a short time, we have to depend on our abilities to come to the solution and decision for the job. Thus, people who can arrange their job independently is considered to be more qualified.
In my opinion, nobody is perfect so that it is impossible for find the people who are excellent in both of demands. The employers need to accept the correspondence of people but I strongly believe they need put priority over the people who are not afraid of changes, difficulties and persistent.
In conclusion, teamwork skill and independence are two of the most crucial qualities of a good employee but people who have strong passion for job, studying and never give up are the brightest candidates for any vacancy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, lastly, look, so, thus, well, as to, in conclusion, kind of, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1586.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54441260745 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64368847626 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.510028653295 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.3515542933 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.181818182 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.7272727273 20.7667163134 153% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.81818181818 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236838782762 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0996286965843 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0712985634786 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140465062795 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0550283071325 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.93 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.64 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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