Some people think women should be given equal chances to work and excel in their careers. Others believe that a woman’s role should be limited to taking care of the house and children. Which opinion do you agree?
It is believed by many people that the women should be restricted to household chore and bringing up children; however, many opine that it is necessary to give equality to them to master in their profession.
I completely concur with the thought-process that women should be provided equal rights to pursue their professional career if they want. In this essay, I shall discuss the two foremost reasons to why women deserve it: firstly, females are intelligent and creative by nature and secondly, they are citizens too and they have all the fundamental rights to take their decisions.
To begin with, the women are good with multitasking and they have the innate quality to manage work life balance. This is because of their mental fortitude to deal with work and its stress; this is the reason they are sometimes better than male. The abundance of teachers, doctors (gynecologist), chefs, pilots and dietitians are the salient examples of women excellence. In addition, an ambitious and educated female can give better upbringing to her child and can provide a secure future as well.
On the other hand, the society has no right to suppress women only to the home. They have full authority to pursue their career and for this they don’t need to take anyone’s permission. Why women only sacrifice her dreams for the family? This responsibility should be divided between both husband and wife. Furthermore, a woman should always be independent so that when there is a financial crisis, she would be able to support her family.
In conclusion, as aforementioned, I strongly agree with the notion that the women should have equal rights to follow her dream. Moreover, it is evident with surrounding examples that every woman is no less than a man in any field.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1483.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01013513514 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77685234869 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570945945946 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.3172639677 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.928571429 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1428571429 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245686688486 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0844907984493 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0643480505807 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144149946758 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0624500296542 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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