Some people think that women should not be allowed to work in the police force. Do you agree or disagree?
Women are excelling in every field such as science, health, education, or law enforcement. Even though some people have the opinion that females should not be employed as a police officer. This essay is in disagreement with the above-said notion because of the below-mentioned reasons.
To begin with, firstly, women empowerment is the hottest agenda of all the societies and communities. As per the constitution’s Article 14 right to equality, everyone is equal irrespective of creed, caste, or gender, hence, women have equal rights that of men in every phase of life, whether it is to be employed in military, police or teaching department. Therefore, if a woman wants to work in the police department and has shown her caliber by clearing physical, psychological and knowledge tests, then she should be allowed to attain her goals. For instance, Kiran Bedi, first lady IPS officer. She has proved that woman have enough stamina to crack myths of society, and just needs confidence.
Furthermore, women are more organized, responsible, and nurturing as compared to their counterpart men. These qualities help in solving criminal cases in a faster way by analyzing minute details related to the case. For instance, Kerala commissioner, Merin Joseph brought back rape accused from Saudi Arab in 2019 that raped 13 years old girl while being in Kerala and later, ran away to the foreign country. Therefore, they tend to make better decisions in adverse situations, which help in maintaining the law and order of the state.
To conclude, lady officers are far more responsible and organized than men, moreover, they are equal before the legislation, irrespective of gender. Hence, there should be no discrimination and deserving females should be given a chance to explore their dreams.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, while, for instance, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1507.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23263888889 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93666876537 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649305555556 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.5693014995 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.642857143 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5714285714 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.14285714286 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195911120857 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0563228879594 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0730781080293 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111653871529 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0507903749548 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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