Some people think that you can never become fluent in language unless you have spent time living or working in that country To what extent do you agree

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Some people think that you can never become fluent in language unless you have spent time living or working in that country. To what extent do you agree?

As the integration between the countries is becoming more and more popular, being fluent in the second language in contemporary society has become vital. Therefore, some individuals believe that working and living in a particular country is the most efficient way to be fluent, in a language, however, I think that language learners can have a range of other alternative measures.

To begin with, there is no doubt that the environment plays a crucial role in speaking a specific language but the significant element leading to fluency in language comes from inside, on the other hand, the environment is just the place to practice and adapt. Therefore, efforts passion and most importantly practice can completely help people to achieve whatever they want, even they can skillfully use another language besides their mother tongue. Many of the people who are non-native of English speaking countries can also easily converse in the English language. A recent survey by Jagaran Josh has shown that 65 percent of the people agree that it is all about will power to learn something new and different.

Furthermore, living and working in a country where that language is spoken is not only the last pathway to learn the language instead there are various other methods that can be used to learn the language. People can use the internet as the basic source to learn the language as it provides a number of platforms such as youtube where people watch the video and try to imitate and pronounce the same word. Additionally, different social platforms where people can interact with people from different countries and cultures and able to learn the language they need. This not enough, joining a language center can be the best way to learn a language as it will provide the environment to practice and enhance basic knowledge.

To conclude, learning language actually requires a will power of the individuals and some hard efforts. The environment plays a role in learning a language but it contributes very less in learning a specific language.

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Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, but, furthermore, however, if, second, so, therefore, i think, no doubt, such as, to begin with, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1715.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05899705015 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71339613764 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.498525073746 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 542.7 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.9202206731 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.916666667 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.25 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5833333333 7.06120827912 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216924012432 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0887821369328 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0487025110134 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139158882781 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0646656142456 0.056905535591 114% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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