Some people think that zoos are cruel and all the zoos should be closed. However, others think that zoos are useful to protect rare animals. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
The wild animal is also important part of the ecosystem hence, it needs to be preserved. According to certain people, zoos play a crucial role in protecting wild animal rather other has a viewpoint that zoos should be abolished as locking them is cruel and unnecessary. Personally, I agree with the opinion that zoos should be shut down and will discuss both the viewpoints in subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, the supporting ideas for having zoos are as follow. Firstly, zoos act as great helpers in preserving endangered animals by keeping them safe from poaching, hunting, and predator. Hence, it has become the place to rehabilitate potential lost species. Even some of the zoos run breeding programs in order to increase the numbers of some of the endangered species from becoming extinct. For instance, Protect Tiger program in India helped to conserve the national animal of the country.
However, these points can be counted as benefits but to some extent only. Firstly, they are trained for the entertainment of the public, in order to generate the profit to the owner of the zoo because of which they might of ill. It has been reported many times that animals in the zoo expired because of the shortage of food which is less likely to happen when they are in there natural habit. Furthermore, many wild animals are unable to behave normally because of the environment as their counterpart living in the natural environment. They are only limited to cages and small space which forbid their growth. For instance, polar bears can walk around hundreds of kilometers when they are in their Arctic home but in these zoos they can hardly roam five or six kilometers.
To conclude, I certainly agree that zoos should be banned as they limit the independence of the species and mostly used by the owner to gain some profit.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, so, as for, even so, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1524.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88461538462 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5756470881 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554487179487 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9892382422 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.6 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.93333333333 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295052928914 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0958887826067 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.077757777859 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192022845139 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0797219145843 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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