some people work for the same organisation all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organisations. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Perfection of work is very rare to find in an organisation. However, it is sole discretion of individual whether he wants to work for the same organisation for his entire life or wants to change his organisation. Both the views will be discussed with certain examples.
Some people choose to stay in the same organisation because they valued their employees by appreciating their credibility and hard working. It is very well said that employees are equally motivated with appreciation as much as they motivated with the perks. Also, some people choose to stay because they project their future on a most senior level position in the same organisation where they can ace with their efforts.
On the other hand, it is widely accepted that changing your job is more beneficial than staying in the same place for the rest of your life. People demand change because they need to change their environment one of the reason is may be they get bored. It is a fact that people spend about 30 to 40 percent of their daily life in office. Some may choose because the boss is bad like there is a saying that 'pick a boss not a job'. Some organisation does not have enough potential to retain their loyal employees result-failure of business.
Discussing both the views above taking me to conclude that organisations usually fail to motivate employees and that cause them to switch their job. One of the richest person of this earth Mr. Richard Branson (the owner of Virgin Airlines) has rightly said that the employees of any company are their biggest assets. Its your employees who take your business on top.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 230, Rule ID: MAY_BE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'maybe' (=perhaps)?
Suggestion: maybe
... their environment one of the reason is may be they get bored. It is a fact that peopl...
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Line 7, column 316, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...f any company are their biggest assets. Its your employees who take your business o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, so, well, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1329.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79783393502 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62610504113 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552346570397 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 412.2 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.7767024521 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.9285714286 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7857142857 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.64285714286 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293670653206 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0948584695426 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602713888988 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169919670941 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0681289222591 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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