Some scientists believe that in the future computers will be more intelligence than human beings. While some see this as a positive development other worry about the consequences. Discuss both views and give your opinions.
Most of the researchers reiterate that in the coming era artificial intelligence will overrule human beings. Many believe that this is a positive revolution however, others are bothered by repercussions. In my opinion, computers can never replace the human in the field of intelligence and this essay will discuss both the viewpoints in subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, firstly, the champions of the fact that the evolution of computers and the replacement of the human force with computer is a positive development believe that there are various tedious and dangerous works which cannot be done by man can now be done with the help of machines. Apart from this, in the health department, various computer machines have been installed where a patient can pick the symptoms, and as per that computer decide the disease and dispense medicine which means dependency on human doctors has decreased and accuracy increased. For instance, in mines, computer-aided machines are used to find the area suitable for mining and having the required resources.
On the other hand, opponents have credence that people are getting unemployed day by day which means machines can do work more efficiently and can replace the huge man force which means it decreases the expenses of the company. This employment will further result in an increase in criminal activities such as theft, murder, and burglary. This will perturb the economic growth of the country and also decrease the living standard of the people. To illustrate, in a recent survey done by “The Time” it has been revealed that around 12 percent of people have already lost their job with the advent of machines and 45 percent of people are likely to become unemployed in the coming decade.
To conclude, computer intelligence has decreased the lengthy and life-threatening task but they cost the employment and livelihood of various people which will impact the nation’s growth and development.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, so, apart from, for instance, such as, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1644.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21904761905 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82502940361 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546031746032 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.8788798654 49.4020404114 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.454545455 106.682146367 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.6363636364 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4545454545 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204616428233 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0812134095291 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0609924997724 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129366829597 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0800066512864 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.59 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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