Some students take a year off between school and university, to work or to travel. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
Some take a view that students spend an amount of time, approximately one year, between high school graduation and university working or travelling. From my perspective, although a bridge-year between school and university to work or to travel has enormous drawbacks, I believe that it is also tremendously beneficial
There are several reasons why a gap year brings some disadvantages. First, there is a likelihood that/it is likely that taking a year off makes students lose the good study habits and sense of discipline gradually. This is because this is a sufficient amount of time to get the student out of the routine of learning hard. In addition, rarely can students immediately land a good job if they graduate late, compared to fellow students. Students who take a year off to join temporary jobs will be easily tricked into thinking that they have the ability to earn considerable amount of money. As a result, they can make a decision to drop out of university, leading to losing the chance to reach higher in their professional career path later their lives.
Despite the disadvantages of taking a long break between leaving high school and beginning university, the advantages of it are more significant. First of all, a gap year offers extraordinarily great opportunities so that students can experience different cultures. When they travel to a range of countries, they can learn about viewpoints, traditions and lifestyles different from their own. Moreover, the independence and self-confidence are what students can achieve and practice while working in the gap year. Additionally, of vital essence to poor students is taking the one year to earn university tuition fee through part time jobs, this is the necessary time that student can not only earn money to pay the way for studying at university but also learn diverse skills like communication skills.
In conclusion, for the reason that taking one year off is vitally crucial to students between school and university, I think that this has more the benefits than the drawbacks.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, while, i think, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1723.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12797619048 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99868729547 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5625 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 538.2 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.0827717251 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.538461538 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8461538462 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07692307692 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.406430466315 0.244688304435 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143984991201 0.084324248473 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0919927548262 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.270356421147 0.151304729494 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0439232860355 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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