Sometimes governments say how many children a family can have in their country. They may control the number of children someone has through taxes.
It is sometimes necessary and right for a government to control the population in this way.
Do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer.
In some governments, they control families from having too many children. They impose heavy tax penalties and in such way, they also control the population. While This method may not be morally accepted in some parts of the world, I highly agree on this and wish other governments do it. In my view, over-population is a global concern and the earth's resources is being depleted way too fast.
In some countries, telling them that they are over-populated is already an understatement. But that would just pass thru deaf ears as they lack the education to understand what that means. Overpopulated countries tends to be among the impoverished nations of this world. That's why population control thru taxes is justified for them as it is easier for them to comprehend money.
Then There is a global warming, which is an indirect result of natural resources being consumed on a rapid scale. The more mouths to feed, the more we consume, as a result, we've see global temperature continue to rise. We now experience calamities of epic proportion, rising sea levels, as well as new diseases plaguing our countries.
At this point in history, population control is not an option anymore. It is a 'must' and governments should start acting on it. There are too many scientific proof and evidences already, and I believe, educating everyone thru this essay would convince them to have similar position, force governments into action, and save our Earth from destruction.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, then, well, while, as a result, as well as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1225.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 244.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02049180328 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87784013694 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.639344262295 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 377.1 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.3358546938 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.5 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4285714286 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57142857143 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244501805771 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.080343683696 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0718488571084 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139271775026 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104584926317 0.056905535591 184% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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