Studies have shown that children are spending more time watching television and less time doing active or creative activities. Explain why this is the case. Suggest possible measures than can encourage children to participate in active or creative actions.
Recent research have revealed information stating that time spent on watching television by children is increasing versus the time spent on performing creative activities which is decreasing. This essay will discuss this problem as well as the possible solutions that may lead to more children involvement in creative activities.
To begin with, parents are the main factor for this problem and not the children. To elaborate on this, parents are primary responsible for how their children spend their time, if the parents are not paying enough attention to what their children are doing or watching in their free time, they are definitely contributing to this problem. For example, some parents do not have enough time to look for their children or take them out for some creative activities like joining a football team; they are either at work or busy at home. Television provides an Ideal solution to keep a child both quiet, while watching TV, and safe in the same time regardless how much time the children watch the television.
To tackle this problem and solve this critical issue permanently, there are a number of solutions that can be carried out. Firstly, watching television must be regulated to be on specific timing within the day for a maximum of 2 hours per day. Secondly, despite the fact that many parents are busy most of the day, they must allocate daily or weekly time to take the children out for group activities like playing basketball or football or even have fun in children play ground. Thirdly, if the parents start to navigate the children minds to focus on individual interactive games like puzzles or LEGO assembling, this would significantly increase the children intelligence and in the same time lessen the time for watching television.
To conclude, parents are the primary reason behind children spending an increasing time on watching television instead of participating in a single or group activities and to solve this problem parents need to take a serious long term actions to help raising an intelligent generation.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...en the time for watching television. To conclude, parents are the primary rea...
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Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to raise' or 'raise'.
Suggestion: to raise; raise
...ake a serious long term actions to help raising an intelligent generation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, while, for example, in fact, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1734.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11504424779 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73002116289 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.513274336283 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 534.6 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.326648915 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 157.636363636 106.682146367 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.8181818182 20.7667163134 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1818181818 7.06120827912 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.380450240047 0.244688304435 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.160384456203 0.084324248473 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0608157548434 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.261546201616 0.151304729494 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0644981591426 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 13.0946893788 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.01 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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