Technology has a positive effect on education.
Do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your
own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
Technology has become a substantial element when it comes to education progress; I am of the belief that Technology plays an affirmative role in the educational system. My opinion will be illustrated in the lines below.
In the modern era, and after the Internet invention, the technological process has spread to reach all educational branches’. In other words, the use of electronic learning and teaching students how to use it has become one of the top priorities even in public schools; this is exemplified in Egypt, one of the developing countries, which introduced technological gadgets such as Laptops and Tablets to the daily educational subjects and exams. Hence, this is a proof that using technology in learning or teaching community has been a successful addition in the developed countries. Therefore, developing countries are taking the action to be a part of the development civilization.
In addition to the demerits of the technical devices on students, it also encourages educationalists and to create a new ways in teaching by adding visual-audio and video to their explanation and experiments. Moreover, one of the upsides of the technology is online education. Which allows many people from low classes to finish their education while they were working, and others to complete their study in an older age. Therefore, technological system has a broaden the horizons to a higher limits of education. For instance, in 2015 a survey has been published in The New York Times shows that online education has spread all over the world to increase the number of housewives by 62% to join Universities .
My conclusion is that the power of technology and electronic teaching devices has shifted the balance from the hands of a few to the masses. I totally agree that technology positively affected education and helped on its development. I recommend that governments should provide awareness campaigns as an informing method to people about the importance of technology in the educational opportunity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, for instance, in addition, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1698.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25696594427 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17925205856 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547987616099 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 551.7 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.8199461115 49.4020404114 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.285714286 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0714285714 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07142857143 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121011653958 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0442699874433 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0375095029056 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0795970679472 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0304010525269 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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