Television has had a significant influence on the culture of many societies. To what extent would you say that television has positively or negatively affected the cultural development of your society?
Use your own knowledge and experience and support your arguments
with examples and relevant evidence.
Television existence us there from almost more than fifty years. Nowadays, it is treated as an essential commodity by everybody in the society. TV has been playing an important role in the cultural development of the scoety, but at the same time there are negative influences also.
Various advantages and disadvantages are there because of television on cultural development of multiple societies, To start with, television has hugely benefited the people by exploring hidden talents by running regular shows and competitions in areas like music, accademics. This has resulted in opening career doors for people in remote areas which otherwise would has lost somewhere. Secondly, TV regularly propagate programms on adapting healty habbits especially food, fitness routine. People anxiously wait for those programms to watch and imbibe them into their day-to-day life.
However, TV has also influence the society negetively. First of all. People get affected after watching programms of stars playing modern life. Society tries to adapt the in life and in doing so, they go to any extent to earn money in illegal way. Last but not the least, young generation after watching dangerous shown in TV, tries to copy in real life and that has resulted risky for many.
In conclusion, television will continue to play an important role in positive cultural of societies. The television censor board will need to put strong measures in showing life-threating stunts. In addition, media and government should continue spread awareness among people.
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...e in remote areas which otherwise would has lost somewhere. Secondly, TV regularly ...
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...condly, TV regularly propagate programms on adapting healty habbits especially fo...
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...eople anxiously wait for those programms to watch and imbibe them into their day-...
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... day-to-day life. However, TV has also influence the society negetively. First of all. P...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, in addition, in conclusion, first of all, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1304.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 242.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38842975207 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76745998689 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.665289256198 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 55.8766100936 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.9333333333 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1333333333 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.2 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162639144037 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0483486762062 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0562362824676 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0952480670726 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0261561980151 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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