There are social, medical and technical problems associated with the use of mobile phones.
What forms do they take?
Do you agree that the problems outweigh the benefits of mobile phones?
The problems associated with the usage of cell phones can be divided in to various forms such as health issues, social problems and technological problems. These complications have some inimical effects on the life of human beings. However, I believe that benefits of mobile phones outnumber its drawbacks because of the ease in communication and internet access.
To begin with, the primary problem that is created by mankind over the usage of mobile phones is less socializing. In other words, these days, people consider spending more time with their mobile phones by watching videos and using social network websites. Needless to say, people interact less with other people of society and this also makes today’s children manner deficient.
In addition to this, the mobile towers constantly emit ultra-violet rays in the surroundings, which develop diseases like heart-stroke and brain tumor in the humans. These health issues have deleterious effects on the health and sometimes can lead to sudden death in humans.
Moreover, since older generation is not well equipped with the knowledge of how to use mobile phones, they find it difficult to use and sometimes even lead to various fraud activities triggered by experts based on technology. Take the example of various shops, which takes thousands of rupees for the installation of applications in mobiles phones of older people that can be done easily by the today’s generation free of cost.
Nevertheless, the advancements in the communication sector outweigh the benefits involved with the access of mobile phones. People can use cell phones and can access internet for work related purpose anywhere and anytime. Furthermore, several network providers these days do not even take exorbitant charges for the calls made to other countries. All such benefits are boon to the people in the field of communication.
To conclude, although there are number of problems associated with the usage of cell telephone; however, the benefits such as ease in communication totally outweigh its disadvantages.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, well, in addition, such as, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1745.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38580246914 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85142927498 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54012345679 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 548.1 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4952807837 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.333333333 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.352798280012 0.244688304435 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10864435178 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0784195921594 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168685302746 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0716928591271 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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